Tuesday, October 27, 2015

Free Writing Output by Bella


"I Was Lost in the Big Z O O!"

by Ysabella Anne C. Asuncion
April   , 2015


"I was lost in the big zoo." This was the writing prompt which I gave the kids for their first free writing activity. This was what Bella wrote:

I was lost in the big zoo when we went there one summer. I kept looking at the koalas until I relized (sic) that Mom, Dad, and Lucas were out of sight. I felt sad and started to cry. The animals stared at me. I cried louder and louder till my Dad found me.



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